
He offers abundance
To those who will believe
All are welcome
Senryu
“Come and see the works of God; He is awesome in His deeds toward the children of men” Psalm 66:5 AMP

He offers abundance
To those who will believe
All are welcome
Senryu
“Come and see the works of God; He is awesome in His deeds toward the children of men” Psalm 66:5 AMP

July 4th
God’s Fireworks
Light up the horizon
And set nighttime heavens soundlessly
Ablaze!
Cinquain
(As our neighborhood and city was putting on a very noisey fireworks display, God entered with the most beautiful brilliant sunset that awed many)

#NaPoWriMo–Day 26–Prompt: a challenge to write a poem that incorporates a call and response. Calls-and-responses are used in many sermons and hymns (and also in sea chanties (or shanties)!), in which the preacher or singer asks a question or makes an exclamation, and the audience responds with a specific, pre-determined response. (Think: Can I get an amen?, to which the response is AMEN!.). You might think of the response as a sort of refrain or chorus that comes up repeatedly, while the call can vary slightly each time it is used.
I wrote a Sea Shantie (or Chantie) in which I imagined what a Sunday Service at sea would be like conducted by a fiery Spirit-filled preacher aboard a ship filled with sailors. 🙂