Daily Prompt, January 2014, PTWWW-"Be Inspired" Challenge, Triolet

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Posted on January 16, 2014 by Leonas Lines

Because I thought victory would be mine
I was over confident
I didn’t tow the line
Because I thought victory would be mine
I assumed all was fine
And I lost the event
Because I thought victory would be mine
I was over confident

Triolet
Leona J. Atkinson 01-15-14

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Author: Leonas Lines

A born and raised Midwesterner who traveled to Oregon in 2006 via the Oregon Trail route, fell in love with Oregon and now call it home. I am retired and pursuing my life long dream of becoming a Freelance Inspirational Writer. View All Posts

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painttheworldwithwords says:

January 17, 2014 at 2:41 AM

Nice! This is a good and to-the-point poem. I really liked the poem and I am thankful that you have participated for this challenge.

Thanks 🙂

Wonderful piece! Nice to see you attempt this poetic form!

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1. Leonas Lines says:
  
  January 17, 2014 at 11:13 AM
  
  Thank you! I really appreciate your comments. I so enjoyed the challenge! Thanks for visiting.
  
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  1. painttheworldwithwords says:
    
    January 18, 2014 at 4:27 AM
    
    You’re welcome L! I really enjoyed your poetry and hope to see you participate in the future challenges too! Have a great day:)
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