January 2018, Mini-Monoverse

Suspiration

Posted on January 23, 2018 by Leonas Lines

Tearful sad face

Tear in eye

Saying goodbye

Dont know why

Long deep sigh

I perspire

Lungs respire

I do aspire

To so inquire

Mini-Monoverse

Author: Leonas Lines

A born and raised Midwesterner who traveled to Oregon in 2006 via the Oregon Trail route, fell in love with Oregon and now call it home. I am retired and pursuing my life long dream of becoming a Freelance Inspirational Writer. View All Posts

7 thoughts on “Suspiration”

Sadah says:

January 23, 2018 at 11:41 PM

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1. Leonas Lines says:
  
  January 23, 2018 at 11:48 PM
  
  Thank you! I will check it out! 😊
  
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Candy Lebby says:

January 24, 2018 at 12:00 PM

Interesting poetic form!

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1. Leonas Lines says:
  
  January 24, 2018 at 1:17 PM
  
  Yes it is! Can be quite challenging! 😊
  
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  1. Candy Lebby says:
    
    January 24, 2018 at 2:42 PM
    
    Well done. You’ve done a great job.
  2. Leonas Lines says:
    
    January 24, 2018 at 2:54 PM
    
    Thank you! 😊
  3. Candy Lebby says:
    
    January 24, 2018 at 2:57 PM
    
    😊💜