Posted in February 2018, Reverse Etheree

Facing the Door of Doom


Door

Fear envelopes like a wet blanket.

I shiver from cold thoughts filling my mind,

Flooding like a broken faucet,

Drowning me with anxiety.

I sit frozen with fear,

As darkness threatens.

Then light breaks thru,

My mind clears,

Jesus

Saves!

Reverse Etheree

#Decastich Challenge or #10LPC

https://darksideofthemoon583.wordpress.com/2018/02/16/10-line-poem-challenge-18-reversed-etheree/

Author:

A born and raised Midwesterner who traveled to Oregon in 2006 via the Oregon Trail route, fell in love with Oregon and now call it home. I am retired and pursuing my life long dream of becoming a Freelance Inspirational Writer.

4 thoughts on “Facing the Door of Doom

  1. Oh, wow! Your portrayal of our condition without Christ is as accurate and powerful as the hope you give in the final two lines. Thank you so much for this wonderful verse!

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